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25 April 2008 @ 12:15 am
Title: Beat Downs are a Common Thing
Author: wilted_rose18
Summery: A five foot five sophomore with hardly any muscle tone up against a six foot jealous boyfriend with a mean right hook and steel toed boots, I must have been delusional.
Pairing: None
Rating: PG
Beta: Microsoft Word and myself
Author's Note: This was prompted by the Pencey Prep song "Eighth Grade."

 
 
16 February 2008 @ 09:04 pm
Helloooo MCR!Fandom!
I have a lot of time on my hands! 
And I love reading people's work.
But I also love to help aspiring authors to improve themselves. 
Beta-for-hire!
If you would like a beta, or for me to just go over your work for a critique, please drop me a line!
email: omgrun@gmail.com
AIM: CodeVOILA

Thank you for your time, happy writing! :)

 
 
 
29 December 2007 @ 06:38 pm
Title: Hearts of Ice. [1/1]
Author: heartsunite
Pairing: GerardxFrank
Rating: PG
Summary: Frank finds an unused ice tray, and a couple of chances pass him by.
Dedication/Beta: None.
Disclaimer: I only own the order of the words.

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Current Mood: nervousnervous
Current Music: Calvin Harris
 
 
29 October 2007 @ 10:02 am
OK, this is less a request for con crit than aesthetic opinion, but this place is pretty dead, so I thought I'd ask here.

This drabble I did won a challenge. Usually when I have a fic that places in a challenge I stick the "winner" banner on it, but I think it might take away from the impact of this one. Whaddaya think? Here it is with the banner at the bottom. Should I take it out? Move it?

Title: This Broken City Sky
Author: crossbow1
Rating: PG
Beta: murder_scene
Notes: Written for the mcr_100 Uniform challenge (first place winner).

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11 October 2007 @ 09:27 pm
Title: Forever
Author:diebyownhands
Pairing:Mikey/Ray
Rating:PG
Summary: When you promise forever it's no matter what.
Disclaimer: Not real
Author Notes : I read a book called "Delirio" it's about a man that leaves for 3 days on for work and when he comes back he finds his wife has gone insane. This is the same idea, were the man (Ray) leaves for work, the difference is that Mikey was already "insane" (I don't know if the term fits him proporly) when Ray left but when he returns he finds that Mikey is missing. They are my favorite couple and I wanted something a bit more about loving and being there for someone no matter what. I'd love feed back on "Forever". I'm sorry for this large A/N and I hope it doesn't ruin the story.
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05 October 2007 @ 02:05 pm
I was thinking of re-doing my Frankenstein story with original characters instead of MCR. Do you think it would work? It would have to be a little longer because I'd need to set up the characters a little more, but not much I think. It's AU anyway. I thin the only MCR-specific things in it are a reference to Mikey and Gerard being brothers and a comment about Ray's hair that doesn't make any sense since I never described him. Oh, and the line about Mikey coming dangerously close to having a facial expression - I wonder if I should just take that out or elaborate on it. I think take it out, since in another place I have him grinning. OOPS.
 
 
Title: My Way Home is Through You
Author: shira
Pairing: Implied GW/FI; GW/LB
Rating: PG
Summary: If only Gerard knew, he's Frank's only way home...
Dedication/Beta: *gasp* Unbeta'd, but I'm in the market for one, so... anyone?
A/N: Seriously, I'm looking for a beta who can check my work before I post more stuff. In this case, I've gone over this three times and already spell-checked so it should be good, but I'm sure I've managed to miss something. ALSO: I'm not new to bandfic, but new to MCR fic, so if I've made any glaring mistakes in regard to the band or its history/information, please let me know, because I'm that kind of a stickler for details.
Disclaimer: Not mine, not making any money off this, just getting my jollies thinking about pretty boys because I can.

My Way Home is Through You
 
 
15 September 2007 @ 01:30 am
Title: Pompeii
Author: sabotaged
Rating: R
Pairing: Gerard/Frank
Word Count: 1,202
Summary: You always hurt the ones you love most, whether intentional or not.
Disclaimer: This is fiction.
Author's Note: It would be incredibly wonderful if you could take a moment and listen to Say Something, by LAPUSH which can be found here at their Purevolume page. This is loosely based on the lyrics, and on the over all feel of the song. Thank you to anyone who reads. Con-crit welcomed and appreciated. Thank you to my wonderful beta, un_related, without you dear I'd be lost. This was written for mychemicaltest's sin/virtue challenge, my choice being wrath. It placed in 2nd.
Warnings: possibly character death, sadness, it depends on how you view things

Wow, I wrote this a while back. It's one of the only things I've written that I sort of like, but at the same time I'm rather critical of myself, and I keep on finding things I wished I could have portrayed better. And I did have to limit things because of the word limit. I do worry about my writing being purple prose sometimes, so input would be really appreciated. I put so much symbolism in here it's really painful XD so if you have any questions about anything don't hesitate to ask. Thank you xx


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14 September 2007 @ 09:44 am
Hello, members of mcrficconcrit! I've complied a list of links that may be very useful to the members of this community and I will be posting a link every week or so, whether it be about gay sex, grammar rules or general rules about writing fanfiction. These posts will also go into the memories so that you can refer back to them if need be. Credit to qeverything for finding most of the links. The first one will be Citizens Against Bad Slash. It deals with just about everything, including tips and suggestions on writing fic, the difference between critiquing and flaming, a glossary for slash terms and much more. Please put it to good use and enjoy. If you have any suggestions or questions, please comment in this post.  

-Jenny
 
 
Current Mood: chipperchipper
Current Music: Blaqk Audio
 
 
10 September 2007 @ 07:30 pm
Title: They Don't Love You Like I Love You [9/?]
Author: ohvick
Pairing: Mikey/Alicia, Mikey/Gerard, Gerard/SURPRISE
Rating: PG-13
POV: Mrs. Way (Alicia)
Summary: If I had done what I should’ve done, I wouldn’t have found out how very wrong I’d been and how much worse the situation really was.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of these people, nor do i believe or wish that the Ways are anything more than superbrothers. Now that that's settled, let's pray that we don't go to hell for this. DX
Author Notes: I got this idea from when i was making a bowl of ice cream (with chocolate sauce and sprinkles) and my sister called me fat. -_- thanks skinny bitch. p.s. this is soooo not fluff.
Dedication: jujubescavities for putting aside all her morals and reading this. ILY! and for all those who read this story, because without you, I'd be writing for nothing, obviously.
Beta: my hero, crossbow1

Perfect.
This Picture.
Worse.
Murder.
Sleep.
Brownies.
Fatty.
Ugly.


Escape.

idk, sometimes i think my chapters are too short. but i know i dont want it like those drawn out stories where there's just so much unnecessary things. is it a problem that i could fix? or is it fine the way it is?